[vlc-commits] Qt: grammar fixes

[Edward Wang]

vlc | branch: master | Edward Wang <edward.c.wang at compdigitec.com> | Sat Jul 13 15:38:49 2013 -0400| [69d75edde2c5b7f70f238d7f7546cc418c3f18ea] | committer: Jean-Baptiste Kempf

Qt: grammar fixes

Signed-off-by: Jean-Baptiste Kempf <jb at videolan.org>

> http://git.videolan.org/gitweb.cgi/vlc.git/?a=commit;h=69d75edde2c5b7f70f238d7f7546cc418c3f18ea
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 modules/gui/qt4/dialogs/firstrun.cpp |    8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/gui/qt4/dialogs/firstrun.cpp b/modules/gui/qt4/dialogs/firstrun.cpp
index e66ee7e..448e5b9 100644
--- a/modules/gui/qt4/dialogs/firstrun.cpp
+++ b/modules/gui/qt4/dialogs/firstrun.cpp
@@ -69,16 +69,16 @@ void FirstRun::buildPrivDialog()
     QGroupBox *blabla = new QGroupBox( qtr( "Privacy and Network Access Policy" ) );
     QGridLayout *blablaLayout = new QGridLayout( blabla );
     QLabel *text = new QLabel( qtr(
-        "<p>In order to protect your privacy, the <i>VLC media player</i> "
+        "<p>In order to protect your privacy, <i>VLC media player</i> "
         "does <b>not</b> collect personal data or transmit them, "
         "not even in anonymized form, to anyone."
         "</p>\n"
         "<p>Nevertheless, <i>VLC</i> is able to automatically retrieve "
         "information about the media in your playlist from third party "
-        "Internet-based services. That includes covert arts, track names, "
-        "authoring and other meta-data."
+        "Internet-based services. This includes cover art, track names, "
+        "artist names and other meta-data."
         "</p>\n"
-        "That may entail identifying some of your media files to third party "
+        "Consequently, this may entail identifying some of your media files to third party "
         "entities. Therefore the <i>VLC</i> developers require your express "
         "consent for the media player to access the Internet automatically."
         "</p>\n"